Post by Silvie on Jul 31, 2016 4:49:03 GMT
Okay. I know what you're all thinking: "dayyum gurl Gleamstar be 2 unreal" Am I right? Well, it's true, but this isn't mostly my work...
I'm sure you're all familiar with Starkit's Prophecy, right? Well, I've taken it under my metaphorical wing and am literating it- you heard me, literating it!
It is called Gleamstar's Prophecy instead of Starkit's Prophecy because the actual books go after the cat's last name before they die, so it's Bluestar's Prophecy, not Bluefur's Prophecy, and it's Goosefeather's Curse, not Goosekit's Curse. The only exception is Tigerclaw's Fury, as that book is only called that because it is never in the point of view of Tigerkit, Tigerpaw or Tigerstar, only Tigerclaw.
Anyway, this is a hard task, since most of it is done in nonsense and whatnot, but I hope to finish it. Anyway, I have already finished the allegiances, so I'm going to post them here:
ALLEGIANCES
Okay! So, like I said, this is my first story. Be nice, please.
By the way, it's after Sunset, so...
ThunderClan
Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt
Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Medicine Cat: Jayfeather - Grey tabby tom with blind blue eyes
Warriors:
Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes
Leafpool - light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes, former medicine cat
Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom
Sandstorm - pale ginger she-cat
Cloudtail - long-haired white tom
Daisy - cream long-furred she-cat from the horseplace
Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom
Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes
Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom
Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches
Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes
Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes
Birchfall - light brown tabby tom
Graystripe - long-haired gray tom
Berrynose - cream-colored tom
Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat
Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom
Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat
Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat
Honeyfern - light brown tabby she-cat
Lionblaze - golden tabby tom
Hollyleaf - black she-cat
Foxleap - reddish tabby tom
Icecloud - white she-cat
Toadstep - black and white tom
Rosepetal - dark cream she-cat
Briarlight - dark brown she-cat
Bumblestripe - very pale gray tom with black stipes
Blossomfall - pale brown she-cat with a dark stripe along her spine
Apprentices:
Flamepaw - flame-coloured she-cat with one green eye, one blue eye
Lakepaw - blue-grey she-cat with blue eyes
(The two above are Starpaw's sisters)
Starpaw - greyish-blue-purple she-cat with melting orange eyes and a white star on her forehead
Jazzpaw - reddish she-cat with blue eyes and a black tail
Queens:
Ferncloud - pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat with green eyes, mother of Dustpelts kits
Dawnsparkle - bright tortoiseshell she-cat with gargantuan blue eyes, mother of Jayfeather's kits, formerly of ShadowClan
Elders:
Longtail - pale tabby tom with dark black stripes, retired early due to failing sight
Mousefur - small dusky brown she-cat
Weaselpelt - big red tabby tom with bight yellow eyes, Rowanclaw's dad (he came to ThunderClan when Dawnsparkle did)
ShadowClan
Leader: Blackstar - large white tom with huge jet-black paws
Deputy: Russetfur - dark ginger she-cat
Medicine Cat: Littlecloud - very small tabby tom
Apprentice, Flamepaw (ginger tom)
Warriors:
Oakfur - small brown tom
Apprentice, Tigerpaw (dark brown tabby tom)
Rowanclaw - ginger tom
Smokefoot - black tom
Apprentice, Owlpaw (light brown tabby tom)
Ivytail - black, white and tortoiseshell she-cat
Apprentice, Dawnpaw (cream-furred she-cat)
Toadfoot - dark brown tom
Crowfrost - black-and-white tom
Apprentice, Olivepaw (tortoiseshell she-cat)
Kinkfur - tabby she-cat, with long fur that sticks out at all angles
Ratscar - brown tom with long scar across his back
Apprentice, Shrewpaw (Grey she-cat with black feet)
Snaketail - dark brown tabby tom with striped tail
Apprentice, Scorchpaw (dark gray tom)
Whitewater - white she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye
Apprentice, Redpaw (mottled brown and ginger tom)
Tawnypelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes
Queens:
Snowbird - pure white she-cat
Elders:
Cedarheart - dark gray tom
Tallpoppy - long-legged light brown she-cat
WindClan
Leader: Onestar - brown tabby tom
Deputy: Ashfoot - gray she-cat
Medicine Cat: Barkface - short-tailed brown tom
Apprentice, Kestrelpaw (mottled gray tom)
Warriors:
Tornear - tabby tom
Crowfeather - dark gray tom
Owlwhisker - light brown tabby tom
Whitetail - small white she-cat
Nightcloud - black she-cat
Gorsetail - very pale gray-and-white cat with blue eyes
Weaselfur - ginger tom with white paws
Harespring - brown-and-white tom
Leaftail - dark tabby tom, amber eyes
Apprentice, Thistlepaw (long-haired white tom)
Dewspots - spotted gray she-cat
Apprentice, Sedgepaw (light brown tabby she-cat)
Willowclaw - gray she-cat
Apprentice, Swallowpaw (dark gray she-cat)
Antpelt - brown tom with one black ear
Emberfoot - gray tom with two darker paws
Apprentice, Sunpaw (tortoiseshell she-cat with large white mark on her forehead)
Heathertail - light brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Breezepelt - black tom with amber eyes
Elders:
Morningflower - very old tortoiseshell queen
Webfoot - dark gray tabby tom
RiverClan
Leader: Leopardstar - unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat
Deputy: Mistyfoot - gray she-cat with blue eyes
Medicine Cat: Mothwing - dappled golden she-cat
Apprentice, Willowshine (gray tabby she-cat)
Warriors:
Blackclaw - smoky-black tom
Voletooth - small brown tabby tom
Apprentice, Minnowpaw (dark gray she-cat)
Reedwhisker - black tom
Mosspelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentice, Pebblepaw (mottled gray tom)
Beechfur - light brown tom
Rippletail - dark gray tabby tom
Apprentice, Mallowpaw (light brown tabby tom)
Graymist - pale gray tabby
Dawnflower - pale gray she-cat
Dapplenose - mottled gray she-cat
Pouncetail - ginger-and-white tom
Mintfur - light gray tabby tom
Apprentice, Nettlepaw (dark brown tabby tom)
Otterheart - dark brown she-cat
Apprentice, Sneezepaw (gray-and-white tom)
Pinefur - very short-haired tabby she-cat
Apprentice, Robinpaw (tortoiseshell-and-white tom)
Rainstorm - mottled gray-blue tom
Duskfur - brown tabby she-cat
Apprentice, Copperpaw (dark ginger she-cat)
Queens:
Icewing - white cat with green eyes (mother of Beetlekit, Pricklekit, Petalkit, and Grasskit)
Elders:
Heavystep - thickset tabby tom
Swallowtail - dark tabby she-cat
Stonestream - gray tom
Chapter one: The Prologue
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she-cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "Out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
"Its about Starkit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest." He looked at a golden tom by Bluestar. "She has powers nobody could have dreamed of." Said the golden tom. "Should we tell Jayfeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said Bluestar. "He needs to know."
She walked away from the pool to tell Jayfeather about the prophecy.
did you like it? please tell me in your reviews!
Chapter Two: The Rise of a Heroine
Okay! Jazzie-kun, please don't get mad at me just because you're not in it yet. You'll appear soon, don't worry.
Starkit woke up and the sunlight was in the branches. She closed her eyes again, still tired, but her mom wouldn't let her sleep. not today.
"Sweetie, its time to get up." said Dawnsparkle, her eys shining. "Today is important."
"What is it, Mom?" said Starkit, awake right away. Then the she-cat remembered what today was.
"Oh my gosh, its my ceremony today!' She squealed excitedly. Today was the day she was going to become an apprentice!
She flicked outside, not even waiting for her mom, but her mom cought up to her quickly.
"Sweetie, you know the clans don't except cats like us sometimes." She said.
Starkit glared at her. She didn't like being told that. Just because her mom used to be a ShadowClan cat and her dad was Jayfeather, the Medicine Cat, didn't mean she was different!
"Starkit, come here." Said Firestar from the ledge. He jumped down.
"Starkit, it is time for you to become an apprentice." he said. "You're a strong, brave cat, and because of that I will mentor you."
Everybody gasped. Starkit did too. She herd hear mother say "Wow!"
Firestar licked her shoulder. He whispered in her ear, "You'll be the best there ever was, Starpaw. I know it."
Surpised, she walked away when the clan were done yowling for her. Then, she went ofer to Jayfeather and Dawnsparkle, who were very proud.
"Daughter, we're very happy, but he have to say something." Said Jayfeather, his chest puffed out. "You see, there is this prophecy StarClan gave me - it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
Starpaw gasped. "What does it mean?"
Lol, I update fast don't I? Review, or I'll hit you over the head with a frying pan! XD Just kidding.
Chapter Three: The Battle for The Clan
Thanks, jazzie-kun, for the good review! And stop flaming the story! I bet you can't write such a good story!
Starpaw walked over to the apprentice's den. Inside, she saw her sisters, Flamepaw and Lakepaw, and her friend, Jazzpaw, (A.N: Jazzie-kun you're my bff!) who was sleeping on the moss.
"Jazzpaw, get up." She cried. Jazzpaw opened her brilliant blue eyes and looked at her.
"Do you want to go on patrol with me?" she asked.
"Sure!" Said Jazzpaw, getting up from the moss. They left and went to the entrance to camp.
But then, a cat came in through the entrance! It was Blackstar!
"ShadowClan are attacking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from their dens. She jumped on a cat and clawed him, and he ran off.
"Good job, Starpaw!" Firestar called. "The last cat I knew that could fight like that was Sandstorm. You're a good fighter!"
Starpaw was happy. She was a good fighter! Maybe this was what the prophecy meant.
Thanks, and please no more flames.
Chapter Three: The Training Under The Stars
OMG Guys, I'm so sorry but "SOMEONE" -glares at Rainy Days- FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKAY! If you don't like the story, you don't have to read it, you know.
ShadowClan ran from the camp. Starpaw smiled. She'd won! No one could hurt her family now.
Starpaw!" said Firestar. "It's time we train! I want to show you how to fight!"
"Ok." Said Starpaw happily. "but you just saw I could fight, right?"
"Well, yeah..." said Firestar. "But I wanted to see if that was all you knew."
"Okay." They went to the forest together and the other cats cleaned up the bodies. "Okay, Starpaw." said Firestar once they got there. "We'll start with how to dodge."
"C'mon... that's too easy!" yelled Starpaw. She'd just beat Blackstar. She was ready for anything!
"Okay, okay..." mewed Firestar. "lets learn how to claw an opponent."
"Yeah!" Yowled Starkit. She jumped at Firestar, not giving him time to attack. She hit his side. He didn't move - he was too surprised. She clawed him and he started bleeding. "Wow, Starpaw." he said "You're doing awesome."
"Really?" gasped Starpaw. She didn't think she was doing that good. Was she really special, like the prophecy meowed?
"Yes, Starpaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldn't even get away fast enough. Only Scourge did that before."
"OH MY GOSH, REALLY?" asked Starpaw. Scourge?!? THE SCOURGE? She'd heard so much about him. He was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURGE?"
"I didnt mean it like that." Firestar said quickly. "I meant you were a good fighter. It's really cool." At that minute he thought to himself, Starpaw's so kawaii... look at her eys and her fur...
"Oh, okay. thanks." They trained for a while later. Starpaw beat Firestar 8 times; once she let him win to make him fel better, and by the last one she was a little tired.
"Hey Firestar, can we hunt now?" Said Starpaw. "I'm kinda hungry."
"Oh. Well, if you want." Firestar was disappointed; he and Starpaw had been having so much fun. They went hunting. Starpaw messed up a couple of times but Firestar said it was okay since it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a little kit and she and Firestar had snuck out together. That's why he chose her as his apprentice).
Later that night, Starpaw looked up at the stars. She and Firestar had so much fun that day. They'd brought back enough food for the whole clan.
Looking upon at the stars, she turned to her best friend, Jazzpaw, and said, "Do you think we'll ever be up there?"
"Yeah, totally." Said Jazzpaw. "I mean you'll be leader and I'll be deputy one day. We'll have to!"
"Yeah." Said Starpaw, smiling. She loved Jazzpaw (NOT IN THAT WAY YOU SICKOS!) - they were best friends. She looked up at the stars again and smiled, and fell asleep with the StarClan voices whispering in her head.
REVIEW FOR MY LIFE
(Lol. You like it, Jazzy? I made you as kawai as I could.)
I'm sure you're all familiar with Starkit's Prophecy, right? Well, I've taken it under my metaphorical wing and am literating it- you heard me, literating it!
It is called Gleamstar's Prophecy instead of Starkit's Prophecy because the actual books go after the cat's last name before they die, so it's Bluestar's Prophecy, not Bluefur's Prophecy, and it's Goosefeather's Curse, not Goosekit's Curse. The only exception is Tigerclaw's Fury, as that book is only called that because it is never in the point of view of Tigerkit, Tigerpaw or Tigerstar, only Tigerclaw.
Anyway, this is a hard task, since most of it is done in nonsense and whatnot, but I hope to finish it. Anyway, I have already finished the allegiances, so I'm going to post them here:
ALLEGIANCES
Okay! So, like I said, this is my first story. Be nice, please.
By the way, it's after Sunset, so...
ThunderClan
Leader: Firestar - ginger tom with a flame-colored pelt
Deputy: Brambleclaw - dark brown tabby tom with amber eyes
Medicine Cat: Jayfeather - Grey tabby tom with blind blue eyes
Warriors:
Squirrelflight - dark ginger she-cat with green eyes
Leafpool - light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes, former medicine cat
Dustpelt - dark brown tabby tom
Sandstorm - pale ginger she-cat
Cloudtail - long-haired white tom
Daisy - cream long-furred she-cat from the horseplace
Brackenfur - golden brown tabby tom
Sorreltail - tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with amber eyes
Thornclaw - golden brown tabby tom
Brightheart - white she-cat with ginger patches
Spiderleg - long-limbed black tom with brown underbelly and amber eyes
Whitewing - white she-cat with green eyes
Birchfall - light brown tabby tom
Graystripe - long-haired gray tom
Berrynose - cream-colored tom
Hazeltail - small gray-and-white she-cat
Mousewhisker - gray-and-white tom
Cinderheart - gray tabby she-cat
Poppyfrost - tortoiseshell she-cat
Honeyfern - light brown tabby she-cat
Lionblaze - golden tabby tom
Hollyleaf - black she-cat
Foxleap - reddish tabby tom
Icecloud - white she-cat
Toadstep - black and white tom
Rosepetal - dark cream she-cat
Briarlight - dark brown she-cat
Bumblestripe - very pale gray tom with black stipes
Blossomfall - pale brown she-cat with a dark stripe along her spine
Apprentices:
Flamepaw - flame-coloured she-cat with one green eye, one blue eye
Lakepaw - blue-grey she-cat with blue eyes
(The two above are Starpaw's sisters)
Starpaw - greyish-blue-purple she-cat with melting orange eyes and a white star on her forehead
Jazzpaw - reddish she-cat with blue eyes and a black tail
Queens:
Ferncloud - pale gray (with darker flecks) she-cat with green eyes, mother of Dustpelts kits
Dawnsparkle - bright tortoiseshell she-cat with gargantuan blue eyes, mother of Jayfeather's kits, formerly of ShadowClan
Elders:
Longtail - pale tabby tom with dark black stripes, retired early due to failing sight
Mousefur - small dusky brown she-cat
Weaselpelt - big red tabby tom with bight yellow eyes, Rowanclaw's dad (he came to ThunderClan when Dawnsparkle did)
ShadowClan
Leader: Blackstar - large white tom with huge jet-black paws
Deputy: Russetfur - dark ginger she-cat
Medicine Cat: Littlecloud - very small tabby tom
Apprentice, Flamepaw (ginger tom)
Warriors:
Oakfur - small brown tom
Apprentice, Tigerpaw (dark brown tabby tom)
Rowanclaw - ginger tom
Smokefoot - black tom
Apprentice, Owlpaw (light brown tabby tom)
Ivytail - black, white and tortoiseshell she-cat
Apprentice, Dawnpaw (cream-furred she-cat)
Toadfoot - dark brown tom
Crowfrost - black-and-white tom
Apprentice, Olivepaw (tortoiseshell she-cat)
Kinkfur - tabby she-cat, with long fur that sticks out at all angles
Ratscar - brown tom with long scar across his back
Apprentice, Shrewpaw (Grey she-cat with black feet)
Snaketail - dark brown tabby tom with striped tail
Apprentice, Scorchpaw (dark gray tom)
Whitewater - white she-cat with long fur, blind in one eye
Apprentice, Redpaw (mottled brown and ginger tom)
Tawnypelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes
Queens:
Snowbird - pure white she-cat
Elders:
Cedarheart - dark gray tom
Tallpoppy - long-legged light brown she-cat
WindClan
Leader: Onestar - brown tabby tom
Deputy: Ashfoot - gray she-cat
Medicine Cat: Barkface - short-tailed brown tom
Apprentice, Kestrelpaw (mottled gray tom)
Warriors:
Tornear - tabby tom
Crowfeather - dark gray tom
Owlwhisker - light brown tabby tom
Whitetail - small white she-cat
Nightcloud - black she-cat
Gorsetail - very pale gray-and-white cat with blue eyes
Weaselfur - ginger tom with white paws
Harespring - brown-and-white tom
Leaftail - dark tabby tom, amber eyes
Apprentice, Thistlepaw (long-haired white tom)
Dewspots - spotted gray she-cat
Apprentice, Sedgepaw (light brown tabby she-cat)
Willowclaw - gray she-cat
Apprentice, Swallowpaw (dark gray she-cat)
Antpelt - brown tom with one black ear
Emberfoot - gray tom with two darker paws
Apprentice, Sunpaw (tortoiseshell she-cat with large white mark on her forehead)
Heathertail - light brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Breezepelt - black tom with amber eyes
Elders:
Morningflower - very old tortoiseshell queen
Webfoot - dark gray tabby tom
RiverClan
Leader: Leopardstar - unusually spotted golden tabby she-cat
Deputy: Mistyfoot - gray she-cat with blue eyes
Medicine Cat: Mothwing - dappled golden she-cat
Apprentice, Willowshine (gray tabby she-cat)
Warriors:
Blackclaw - smoky-black tom
Voletooth - small brown tabby tom
Apprentice, Minnowpaw (dark gray she-cat)
Reedwhisker - black tom
Mosspelt - tortoiseshell she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentice, Pebblepaw (mottled gray tom)
Beechfur - light brown tom
Rippletail - dark gray tabby tom
Apprentice, Mallowpaw (light brown tabby tom)
Graymist - pale gray tabby
Dawnflower - pale gray she-cat
Dapplenose - mottled gray she-cat
Pouncetail - ginger-and-white tom
Mintfur - light gray tabby tom
Apprentice, Nettlepaw (dark brown tabby tom)
Otterheart - dark brown she-cat
Apprentice, Sneezepaw (gray-and-white tom)
Pinefur - very short-haired tabby she-cat
Apprentice, Robinpaw (tortoiseshell-and-white tom)
Rainstorm - mottled gray-blue tom
Duskfur - brown tabby she-cat
Apprentice, Copperpaw (dark ginger she-cat)
Queens:
Icewing - white cat with green eyes (mother of Beetlekit, Pricklekit, Petalkit, and Grasskit)
Elders:
Heavystep - thickset tabby tom
Swallowtail - dark tabby she-cat
Stonestream - gray tom
Chapter one: The Prologue
The cats gathered around a pool. They all looked into it eagerly. A dark shape appeared on the surface. A blue she-cat looked up. Her eyes were bright.
"There is a prophecy!" She said. "Out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
"Its about Starkit!" A white tom said. "Shes going to save the forest." He looked at a golden tom by Bluestar. "She has powers nobody could have dreamed of." Said the golden tom. "Should we tell Jayfeather?" He asked. "Yes." Said Bluestar. "He needs to know."
She walked away from the pool to tell Jayfeather about the prophecy.
did you like it? please tell me in your reviews!
Chapter Two: The Rise of a Heroine
Okay! Jazzie-kun, please don't get mad at me just because you're not in it yet. You'll appear soon, don't worry.
Starkit woke up and the sunlight was in the branches. She closed her eyes again, still tired, but her mom wouldn't let her sleep. not today.
"Sweetie, its time to get up." said Dawnsparkle, her eys shining. "Today is important."
"What is it, Mom?" said Starkit, awake right away. Then the she-cat remembered what today was.
"Oh my gosh, its my ceremony today!' She squealed excitedly. Today was the day she was going to become an apprentice!
She flicked outside, not even waiting for her mom, but her mom cought up to her quickly.
"Sweetie, you know the clans don't except cats like us sometimes." She said.
Starkit glared at her. She didn't like being told that. Just because her mom used to be a ShadowClan cat and her dad was Jayfeather, the Medicine Cat, didn't mean she was different!
"Starkit, come here." Said Firestar from the ledge. He jumped down.
"Starkit, it is time for you to become an apprentice." he said. "You're a strong, brave cat, and because of that I will mentor you."
Everybody gasped. Starkit did too. She herd hear mother say "Wow!"
Firestar licked her shoulder. He whispered in her ear, "You'll be the best there ever was, Starpaw. I know it."
Surpised, she walked away when the clan were done yowling for her. Then, she went ofer to Jayfeather and Dawnsparkle, who were very proud.
"Daughter, we're very happy, but he have to say something." Said Jayfeather, his chest puffed out. "You see, there is this prophecy StarClan gave me - it said that out of the darkness, stars will come and get rid of the evil tiger and holly."
Starpaw gasped. "What does it mean?"
Lol, I update fast don't I? Review, or I'll hit you over the head with a frying pan! XD Just kidding.
Chapter Three: The Battle for The Clan
Thanks, jazzie-kun, for the good review! And stop flaming the story! I bet you can't write such a good story!
Starpaw walked over to the apprentice's den. Inside, she saw her sisters, Flamepaw and Lakepaw, and her friend, Jazzpaw, (A.N: Jazzie-kun you're my bff!) who was sleeping on the moss.
"Jazzpaw, get up." She cried. Jazzpaw opened her brilliant blue eyes and looked at her.
"Do you want to go on patrol with me?" she asked.
"Sure!" Said Jazzpaw, getting up from the moss. They left and went to the entrance to camp.
But then, a cat came in through the entrance! It was Blackstar!
"ShadowClan are attacking!" She yelled. All the cats came out from their dens. She jumped on a cat and clawed him, and he ran off.
"Good job, Starpaw!" Firestar called. "The last cat I knew that could fight like that was Sandstorm. You're a good fighter!"
Starpaw was happy. She was a good fighter! Maybe this was what the prophecy meant.
Thanks, and please no more flames.
Chapter Three: The Training Under The Stars
OMG Guys, I'm so sorry but "SOMEONE" -glares at Rainy Days- FLAMED ME AND I GOT REALLY HURT. OKAY! If you don't like the story, you don't have to read it, you know.
ShadowClan ran from the camp. Starpaw smiled. She'd won! No one could hurt her family now.
Starpaw!" said Firestar. "It's time we train! I want to show you how to fight!"
"Ok." Said Starpaw happily. "but you just saw I could fight, right?"
"Well, yeah..." said Firestar. "But I wanted to see if that was all you knew."
"Okay." They went to the forest together and the other cats cleaned up the bodies. "Okay, Starpaw." said Firestar once they got there. "We'll start with how to dodge."
"C'mon... that's too easy!" yelled Starpaw. She'd just beat Blackstar. She was ready for anything!
"Okay, okay..." mewed Firestar. "lets learn how to claw an opponent."
"Yeah!" Yowled Starkit. She jumped at Firestar, not giving him time to attack. She hit his side. He didn't move - he was too surprised. She clawed him and he started bleeding. "Wow, Starpaw." he said "You're doing awesome."
"Really?" gasped Starpaw. She didn't think she was doing that good. Was she really special, like the prophecy meowed?
"Yes, Starpaw." Snarled Firestar. "I couldn't even get away fast enough. Only Scourge did that before."
"OH MY GOSH, REALLY?" asked Starpaw. Scourge?!? THE SCOURGE? She'd heard so much about him. He was really evil and killed alot of cats. "I'M LIKE SCOURGE?"
"I didnt mean it like that." Firestar said quickly. "I meant you were a good fighter. It's really cool." At that minute he thought to himself, Starpaw's so kawaii... look at her eys and her fur...
"Oh, okay. thanks." They trained for a while later. Starpaw beat Firestar 8 times; once she let him win to make him fel better, and by the last one she was a little tired.
"Hey Firestar, can we hunt now?" Said Starpaw. "I'm kinda hungry."
"Oh. Well, if you want." Firestar was disappointed; he and Starpaw had been having so much fun. They went hunting. Starpaw messed up a couple of times but Firestar said it was okay since it was only her second time (she'd had her first time when she was a little kit and she and Firestar had snuck out together. That's why he chose her as his apprentice).
Later that night, Starpaw looked up at the stars. She and Firestar had so much fun that day. They'd brought back enough food for the whole clan.
Looking upon at the stars, she turned to her best friend, Jazzpaw, and said, "Do you think we'll ever be up there?"
"Yeah, totally." Said Jazzpaw. "I mean you'll be leader and I'll be deputy one day. We'll have to!"
"Yeah." Said Starpaw, smiling. She loved Jazzpaw (NOT IN THAT WAY YOU SICKOS!) - they were best friends. She looked up at the stars again and smiled, and fell asleep with the StarClan voices whispering in her head.
REVIEW FOR MY LIFE
(Lol. You like it, Jazzy? I made you as kawai as I could.)